An Ode to Non-Existent Missing Shoes

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An Ode to Non-Existent Missing Shoes

Postby dmac » Sun Jan 08, 2017 6:16 pm

A short poem I wrote about, ostensibly, the missing shoes. I normally hate "poetry that rhymes", as it's entirely against the point. Poetry is jazz, and you win in YOUR OWN HEAD if you GET IT. All else don't. It's no competition, it's art perception.
This is Beatles pop (which I massively admire) rather than poetry. Here it goes about them shoes:

    Mom is a killer
    so we must consider

    which whimpering assholes
    simpering over missed soles

    footwear burning in post-murder fires
    alongside leaves, three-piecers, empires

    Dee and Tony's hole gripe
    the jail dropped-soap love plight

    Loon, nearby, dying of strangulanus
    from their stink-dicks shoved up & down her soul pipe

It's a Greatest Hits List. POI my ass!


BTW ask and I can explain how any part of the 'poem' goes to the nuts of various parts of the 81-12 non-case.
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Re: An Ode to Non-Existent Missing Shoes

Postby leenie963 » Tue Jan 10, 2017 8:48 am

Love it!!

If the mood strikes I may pen "Ode to the Griping Assholes" Bahaha!
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